First Attempt

[Barely Human]

Ok, this is my first serious attempt at a hard techno track. Feedback would be most apprieciated, good or bad.

Thanks in Advance ;)

http://www.the-iq.net/audio/Sandwiches%20-%202.0.mp3

[Mika Silo]

you got some nice grooves going here man :) especially from 1:19 to 1:44, after that it's getting a little too busy imo..
The main sound is a bit to loud imo and I would make it more dynamic.. but you aren't finished yet, so you may already planned doing that :lol:
I would like to hear it when it's finished! :)

[The Divide]

Work those highs and it will sound much better mate, wickid first attempt tho. I think its too busy in the highs when it kicks in.

[professor]

sounds like techno. well done. def not my cuppa, but great first attempt. are you programing all of your drums? If so, just take out some to give the others a little room to breathe.
thanks for the listen

[dan the acid man]

this could seriously rock, the high's need to be sharper, love the percussion, it get's a bit too busy though at around 1.40, i would maybe push the new sound's further back with more reverb

[Rog]

from 1min 40 ish where that harsh perc comes in , then the kick etc drops.. jsut remove the same percussion that built it up to the drop.. then i will be bouncing off the walls..

quality mate :clap: :clap: :clap: