[track] Akkachar - My Range Is In Texas (industrial/offbeat)

[Akkachar]

I hope you like this one folks...

tell me your opinion...

http://www.sitesled.com/members/akkachar/music/Akkachar%20-%20My%20Range%20Is%20In%20Texas.MP3

:twisted:

[Spark]

Chaf!

As i told you before i really like this one!!! Very dark and moody, it sound like a war in space!

I only think that the soundscaped ao are sounding to hard.. or maybe the volume of the kicks is to low..

Keep up the good work!

And dont forget.. Dock Pilots are comming to get ya!

[Akkachar]

thanx mate

Dock Pilots yeah!!!

[Akkachar]

any comments?

:roll:

[dirty_bass]

Quite hard, but all based on one trick. Heavy compression and the pumping and breathing effects of it.
Ambience and a kick isn`t enough for my personal tastes.
Could do with some punchy mid range percussion and a clear top end to make it really rock.
Back off the compression and put some pragrammed percussion and hat work outs in there.

[Akkachar]

"Could do with some punchy mid range percussion and a clear top end to make it really rock."

My English sucks big time, what do you exactly mean with this sentence?

thnx

[dirty_bass]

More percussion. More definition in the percussion.
The whole tune is based around a Kickdrum, and some ambience, not a lot else.

[Akkachar]

Aight thanx I'll work on it, appreciate...

[dan the acid man]

i agree, it need's more mid's in there, the kick is too loud for me, it's also missing some high's, as dirty bass said, you want some hat pattern's in here to help tie it together, i like the vox though