JRaninen-Raita27.3-6(Four tracks of basic percussive techno)

[J Raninen]

Finished up four tracks, and thought that here i could get some expert feedback.
44.1hKz, 192kbps, mp3 stereo:

Raita 27.3 (http://people.jyu.fi/~jsranine/JRaninen-Raita27.3.mp3) - 5:00min, 6.9M
Raita 27.4 (http://people.jyu.fi/~jsranine/JRaninen-Raita27.4v2.mp3) - 5:11min, 7.1M
Raita 27.5 (http://people.jyu.fi/~jsranine/JRaninen-Raita27.5v2.mp3) - 5:07min, 7.0M
Raita 27.6 (http://people.jyu.fi/~jsranine/JRaninen-Raita27.6v2.mp3) - 5:40min, 7.8M

[dan the acid man]

i'll have a listen to all of these tomorrow when iv'e got more time ;)

[dan the acid man]

the first track sounds really nice, quite good production, but i feel there is something missing, maybe it need's a few more mids, im not sure

the second track is the same as the previous, show's real promise though

the 3rd track is my favourite so far, the only thing i would change is i would turn up the synth a little more and widen it's sound a little more

the fourtyh track, this is another great tune, you really know how to write percussive rhythms, but again i would bring out the synths a little more.


all of these tracks show you have huge potential though :cool:

also, to maybe help get more feedback, it may be a better idea to post one track at a time, just a thought

[J Raninen]

Thanks for the tips, i'll put them into use!

The reason i put these tracks here as a bunch is, that i did these tracks practically simultaneously during a weekend, and i didn't see any point in dropping them here one by one.

[yorkie]

these tracks are definately release worthy.

i think they are all ace!

:clap:

[dan the acid man]

Thanks for the tips, i'll put them into use!

The reason i put these tracks here as a bunch is, that i did these tracks practically simultaneously during a weekend, and i didn't see any point in dropping them here one by one.

that's good, i just feel that it may put some people off from giving them all a listen, as you can see, you have'nt had much feedback yet, which is a shame, these tracks deserve a listen people