in yer face stuff..

[Tyrisia]

Here's my latest offering, quite old school ravey, and still in progress, so a bit ruff n' ready. :)

Click Me (http://www.tyrisia.com/black_summer.mp3)

[dan the acid man]

this could be a belter of a song, i really like all the elements of this one, like you say it need's more work.
the hat pattern is great, but i would add a bit of variation to it here and there

[Tyrisia]

Thanx Dan, I've spent a couple more hours on it, and put a bit of variation to the hats in. I've posted the new version, link below

Click (http://www.tyrisia.com/black_summer.mp3)

If anyone else has got any opinions, I'd love to hear them. :)

[jaqbip]

Nice balance between old school tracks and a pounding style.
I like it :-)

[dan the acid man]

the hats could still do with a little more variation for my liking, maybe you could try putting in extra little hit's here and there, make it more random sounding, it's something i try and do to break up the rigidity.

the main plus for me about this track is the synth's, they sound really nice, i love the reverb on them :love: