BloodStar - Around the world - groove techno

[BloodStar]

Hi m8s,
please listen to my new techno track, not so hard as my previous tracks but I like it a lot. I worked more on synths,.and groove. hope you'll like it,..

BloodStar_Around the world (http://audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=2772)

Any feedback is much appreciated
thanx m8s
BS

[dirty_bass]

This is very strange. I`m not sure what to make of this, but it`s certainly different.
The kick needs to be a bit more upfront.
Generally the track feels unbalanced with a bias towards the top end.
Wack a spectragraph over it and have a look.
The mid range could do with more separation.
hmmm, yeah, I like this. It`s kinda laid back, and groovy.
Also, I`d use a different bassline. the offbeat hard house oompah is a little overused these days.

[dan the acid man]

very different sounding, it just needs more eqing to bring the sounds alive, i also agree on the bassline, it doesnt do the track justice

[BloodStar]

thank you guys. this is such a experiment I did on Saturday early morning, after I came home from a club, where I played. I did this track within 5-7 hours. It's different sounding and I see that there is place for some progress as you mentioned in the reviews. I will try to work on it still.. btw there is no ofbeat bassline in the track as i see. i will work more on it.,.thanx

[BloodStar]

Hi, I spent some time while trying to improve the track. I add a few rhythm lines, and I also worked on hats..and overall sound. hope this was done succesfully. any feedback is appreciated alot.
thanx

BloodStar_Around the world-edit002 (http://audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=2772)

[jesus]

pretty good , ilike the new hihats and stuff but i rekon it needs a new kick or maybe fatten this one up a bit.

[Col]

eq that synth, it takes too much space in the mix.

as DB said bring the kick to the front.

[dan the acid man]

the synth is a bit overpowering as col said, also the kick still needs some work i think (im at work so im listening on rubbish headphones), apart from that it's coming along nicely

[Si the Sigh]

Yep, deffo need to beef up that kick. Nice track though! :cool:

[detfella]

for me, phatter kick and eq/drop level of the synth. this reminds me more of harder trance than techno.