Naabo - untitled techno track

[Naabo]

Hi, here's my simple looped techno track that has grown since the frst outline made more than one year ago. It's not as big as some production posted on this forum, but it's a start. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks

Link (http://freeweb.siol.net/dodos/Naabo%20-%20Untitled%20(Deralica07v3).mp3)

[dan the acid man]

this is pretty good, i like the mettalic sounding synth :love:
the kick and bass sound a little muffled though

[Evil G]

this totally had my head bobbing. it might need some more bass, but it's definitely got potential. it pounds quite nicely.

[Naabo]

Thanks for the coments guys, they were really helpfull. The bottom end really needed treatment. I tried to fix it, so here is the result, let me know what you think. It's improved a bit, but needs some extra work. Thanks again

[detfella]

i like this, nice deep groovey feel. all the drums & perc fit very nicely. maybe i'd like to hear the bass sound change at some point (even opening the filter)

good work fella!

[dan the acid man]

there's still something i dont like about the kick, it cut's through the mix nicely, but there's something not right about it, i dont know what though :doh:

[Naabo]

Thanks for the feedback. I'm not really shure either how to fix bass & kick so i might even start building them from scratch.

[professor]

I like this. I agree that the mastering is not spot on, but the groove is good!
keep on it.

[FILTERZ]

nice and banging mate ;)

[Naabo]

You've got it right, the track was actually not mastered (mostly due to poor working conditions, which is very frustrating). Thanks for encouraging me.