Jesus- 2 tracks

[jesus]

both only about 3-4 mins at the mo, just wondering what everyone thinks.
the first is funky second is harder. dont be afraid to give me lots of shitty comments like i give you.cheers

thunk - http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1606629&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSong.cfm?ID=1606629

yt - http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=1603065&q=Hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSong.cfm?ID=1603065

[detfella]

do i have to be a member soundclick to download these? have you got any directlinks?

[jesus]

wont use that site again , try these -

http://www.dance-industries.com/dltrack.asp?track_id=6699

http://www.dance-industries.com/dltrack.asp?track_id=6675

[detfella]

i need to be able to save, cos i have no soundcard in this pc :roll:

[dan the acid man]

this first track has a few cuts in it that dont quite sound right yet, with a bit more work though they will sound better.
Also the kick isnt sounding right to me.


the second track's kick is a lot better, the bass is awesome aswell :cool:
again this track at the minute sounds a little loose in places, it just needs tightening up here and there

[jesus]

cheers danny boy, i knew i can trust you to have a listen. im working on rearranging the second at the moment to tighten it up , also doing a remix of the first. ill post em up in a day or 2.

[dirty_bass]

I like the raw funk of the 1st track.
I think overall the sounds could be separated more effectively to balance things out better. But basically, very nice.
I like the odd brakes, but then, I am into the unexpected at the mo.

I like the second track but it seems to lack solidity.
The bottom end could be filled out more under the kick.
And I think the bias is a little too much towards the top end.
Once again a little more separation between the sounds would make this a little more polished.

But in general both these tracks are really nice, and sound different.

[jesus]

wo cheers for the listen dirty bass. i'm in the midd;e of polishing these up ,thanks for the advice ill try and sort them out. when you talk space is that just down to verb, eq, panning or are there other ways of achieving this.

[dirty_bass]

eq mainly, some of the sounds seem a little on top of each other frequency-wise.
Panning can help a little too. But don`t overdo it.