Is this right?

[Barely Human]

Im new to all things techno, and ive just started on a track. Just wondering what you guy's think, if im heading in the right direction?
Any hints and tips and the usual most apreiciated!

http://iq.britersen.co.uk/teckoo.mp3

[Adverse]

very trancy..

[Barely Human]

hmmm, is it the synth? I wondered if it would sound a bit trancy! Im gonna see if i can change the riff a bit so its more detuned.

[Adverse]

wasn't the synth it was the build at the begining. cheers.