Hard an Banging- Somthing slightly different!

[Barely Human]

New tune ive been working on, not finished yet as it only goes up to the break, but any coments welcome :D

http://iq.britersen.co.uk/IQ-Distilled%20Persentage.mp3

[MARKEG]

not bad at all m8.

at first i thought it sounded quite trancey but then it kicks off nicely.

just a thing. i think your stuff can sound a little trancey cause of the top end being very clean. i'd love to hear a mix of this with a more distorted/aggressive top end.

[Barely Human]

Sorted mate, i'll try and dirty it up with and elastic band and my mums old dishcloth! I'll post it up when ive done it.

[Barely Human]

Ive messed about with the top end of it and taken a lot of the reverb of as i though it was making the mix all washy. Im still having trouble getting that agresiveness out of the snares and top end, any ideas?
Here's the new version:-

http://iq.britersen.co.uk/Distilled.mp3

[MARKEG]

distortion.... distort your top end man... there's too much politeness in your sound.

[MARKEG]

sorry if that came across bad :oops: ... your sound is good but if you make the top end more mechanical and dirty i think you'll be onto something...

[Adverse]

politeness ha ha ha.

[MARKEG]

f**k off...

hahahahahhahaaha

[Orange]

another very cool work in progress. keep on. :D

[BOXY]

tell you wot mate i really like this i think it sounds wikkid fair play to yer mate :D

[Barely Human]

Cheers mate, but i just have to knuckle down and get it finished. I have a terible problem with starting a tune and then getting bored with it and starting another, and i have about 200 unfinished tunes siting there!

[Orange]

same prob here!