Just plain odd.

[AcidTrash]

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/peter.north80/fat.mp3

Would appreciate your thoughts on this one. have tried to break away from the usual style and added some more intricacies.

[dan the acid man]

This is ok, but it doesnt grab me, it could maybe do with a bit more groove, the kick is a little too loud in the mix aswell.
I like the mind bending kind of synth that comes in later.

[fatcollective]

I like this. The level of the kick is borderline but i think that it could carry quite nicely through a rig. Not sure about the 303, the riff hooked me in but i feel another sound would do it more justice.

J Smart

[AcidTrash]

Methinks it sucks. It was trying to be this:

http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28629