Bouncy driving tribal style

[Jack]

148bpm driving percussive techno.
Not finished yet need to play with levels and compression on bass and kick. Also need to change a few filter sweeps to make less repetitive
What ya reckon?? any feedback please.

nice 1 Jack

http://213.129.73.14/members/my_tracks/audio/DT_ACF1CCE5759763.mp3

[BRADLEE]

downloading..I'll leave feedback in just a bit

[BRADLEE]

reminds me quite a bit of cluster minus the acid lines. I like where you're going with it so far. I think once you add some more edits to it, it will help quite a bit with the repedativeness of it. Maybe even some subliminal atmospheric synth or something in the background would be cool to pull your attention in another direction. Right now it's just a bit loopy, although very solid in form. :clap:

[dirty_bass]

This is nice and I like the subtle kick, but it`s a little too loopy.
The overall mix feels a little empty, and could do with having the main sounds re-treated to get them right "in your face"
Compression, and maybe some subtle overdrive to some of the sounds will help.
Maybe another synth part at some point to hold the interested after the halfway point, as it becomes a little samey after a while.

[Jack]

Cheers for ideas.
Have changed the bass after the break 1.45m to make it roll a bit more but can't seem to get a synth to sit with the rest.
Changed a couple of sweeps and gave it a t-racks workout to...

Thanks

Jack