New songs from me.

[Joe Mc]

Here's the links

http://joe.arcanevault.com/teketmp3.mp3

http://joe.arcanevault.com/wait%20till%20tomorrow.mp3

Joe.

[Joe Mc]

Any feedback ?.

Joe.

[BRADLEE]

JOE MC “Wait Til Tomorrow”

Starts off with a nice broken techno beat and within 8 bars of the music brings you to a 4X4. Nice little opener right there. Another 16 bars of four beat and he brings it right to the break and a nice dark synth/bass noise. A very nice little break for sure. Gives the tune a nice change in the first section. Although maybe an effect noise of some sort would help the transition into the break. Mayeb a reverse or delayed rum edit… Bringing it back in from the break could also use some sort of edit to pull things together. Rather than just dropping the Synth/Bass noise and going back into the four by four action. Even though there are some things that need some attention, the idea of this tune is really good. Very much in the realm of some KD smith schranz. However I still have a few suggestions…

For your kick Joe, check your levels. Sounds like it is really overloading. Same goes with the synth/bass noise. Maybe it is just an overall over loading of the tune, but it makes it quite muddy. Maybe you could add another kick on top as well to give the kick more depth in the mid ranges too. Do a couple of little reverse edits to the parts right before you get into the break, and right before you get out of the break. That will help the transition.

Sorry to go on so long. I’m just trying to give you as much feedback as possible on it. Since I see that noone else really did. Joe, all in all man, you did a good job bro. I hope you don’t consider my comments as being negative. I’m just trying to give you a few tips.

[Joe Mc]

Thats what im looking for cheers for the advice. im always looking to better my songs.

Joe.