39B - No purpose, no place

[The Divide]

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/39_17.mp3

Sounding phat so far, criticism is welcome...

[Mindful]

wow mate thats quite funky,oh ok now its stomping.Its supertight and clean too.Is this track from your PA? ive heard that little synth before.
I like this geezer it stays intresting thruout and doesnt rely on the usual hard techno tricks.
I like your style it sounds fresh :clap:

[BRADLEE]

yeah Dan-o- really nice updated version right here amigo. Don't change a thing IMO. :twisted: mean as ****....

[audioinjection]

yeah man this is phat, mean and funky at the sametime, good shit :clap:

[xfive]

Nice job
Sounds crispy :)

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[lau]

Yeah sounds really nice...

Love the synths you´ve used!! Is has got a really really dark sound to it!!!

production also good as ever!!... You´ve got a really phat sound to all your trackzz!!

nice :rambo:

[The Divide]

Sweet, it seems to sound chunky. Its just a matter of getting the arrangement right and keeping it interesting. Worked on this more now...

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/39_21MA.mp3

Thanks

[MITA]

my,my,my...heard the first version

its f***** great :rambo:
love the sounds mate ,indeed..

great work! :clap: would spin this fo sure

[The Divide]

Is the 1st version better than the second? Could use your input hehe

Im thinking this needs a little something to add 'movement' when it comes in after the breaks. Not a pad, I'm using too many pads these days possibly some drums filtering or something

Help me please :lol:

[The Divide]

Track 2...

Ok breakdown 1 isn’t that good mite revert back to tune 1's structure at that part

Breakdown 2 sounds alrightt but goes on for too long, needs something else when it comes back in

Plenty to work with here.

[j_s]

i definately prefer the second version. sounds tight. percussion is really well put together. not sure about the piano-like sound, also that distorted pad seems to overwhelm the mix a bit.
in terms of adding movement- a vocal snip to twist up maybe? the track sounds fat as it is, so something too prominent might take away from that.....

[The Divide]

Sweet, get a bit paranoid as I have destoryed loads of tracks by getting carried away with some idea on the arrangement. Its closer now...

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/39_24MA.mp3

[gary_human]

I prefer the 3rd one - I listened in the order of 3-1-2 - kind of like a star wars themed track listing! Sounded like a finished track which i would like to have in my record box ;)

[The Divide]

:lol: Sweet man, nice one

[BloodStar]

just listen to the last version. sounds very nice, love those synths, it's very very nice..., but now i'm on 4.30 and still missing some more action in it,.. don't know..... production is nice,anyway....

[The Divide]

Yea, I think it needs something new after the main break, perhaps take everything i already have and build a new rhythm section

Actually liking the dropped down minimalist section, I would like to hold it back at that level and let it roll instead of going for the euphoric arrangement but that would be a bit risky as it works as a hard track too. Maybe in another mix eh

[The Divide]

As it stands, doesnt seem like a million miles from completion :twisted:

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/40_03MA.mp3

[The Divide]

...but then thinking about it the second bassline comes in too far into the track?

Mite drag the piano (DooOONnnNG) sounds n a bit longer too

[The Divide]

Which would sound like...

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/40_05MA.mp3

Just got to make it a little longer

[Mindful]

ok listening to the first one again now its got me bouncing around in my chair im realy feeling this one,I can see everybody bopping round on the dance floor smiling and having a good time to this.
like I said befor stays intresting thruout while maintaning that stomping little groove and productions sweet as **** of course.
I would love a copy of this.

Very cool :cool:

[Mindful]

The second one Im not feeling as much as the first it seems to drag a bit and the bit where it breaks down in the middle loses intrest much prefere the first one.
listening to the third one now not sure if youve changed the middle section but it sounds better this time round as does the kick in(it may just be that Ive got a brew on this listen tho :lol: )

4th one now(now with brew and cig so am expecting big things this time)
Im getting familiar with this intro now would be realy good for mixing in and taking the outgoing tune out when the syth first drops at 1.50 :rambo: .
The middle bit sounds much better a bit more suspence and it sounds mean now its kicked back in.
thats a cool piece of techno.

Last one.............

[Mindful]

Not much I can say now appart from this rocks,its well produced,intresting thruout and mean as ****.
Will buy this if you find a home for it :clap:

just hope you come up with a better name than 40_05MA :lol:

[The Divide]

Thanks the feedbacks much appreciated mate. I have another version which is longer I just need to have a play around with it in Ableton to see how it sounds in the mix. I think its pretty much complete

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/40_07MA.mp3

[stjohn]

yep! huge!!!

[xfive]

Pretty mental man.. I like it :clap:

[The Divide]

Thanks a lot for the input guys

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You can download the final mix in an ableton mix here (http://www.blackoutaudio.co.uk/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=435629#435629)