View Full Version : casual violence - entering the machine
Mindful
19-09-2005, 10:14 PM
http://www.rosenblatt-sf.com/Selected_Photos/Rubber%20Machine,%20Penang,%20Malaysia%20(07282001 )%20Sepia%20(7x5½).jpg
http://www.algorhythms.co.uk/allsorts/Mindful/casual%20violence%20-%20entering%20the%20machine.mp3
Somthing that on Saturday I was happy with and thought it was complete but as the week begins im not so sure.
maybe theres somthing missing and maybe theres a few holes in the production ,I dont know.
I could realy realy do with some helpful and truthfull feedback and a fresh perspective.
BOYAAAAAH
and erm thanks ;)
oh and big big thanks to Detfella for the space....man(see what I did there)
Mindful
19-09-2005, 11:27 PM
Oh and thats a cool picture dont you think?
Traxx
19-09-2005, 11:36 PM
Was wondering what the deal was with people posting pictures to go with track samples?
Mindful
19-09-2005, 11:41 PM
just cause I can Dude :lol: and good pictures rock
detfella
19-09-2005, 11:54 PM
yeah nice tune, production sounds good to me, i would vary some of the sections some more to give the track more flow and dynamic appeal. im not normally a fan of the pads/ambiences but i really like the chords you are using
really like the spoken sample, feel it could comeback in stronger for me
slow burner as well!! what tempo is it, feels like 133 or something
good job ste and np about hosting ;)
Mindful
20-09-2005, 12:07 AM
Cheers for listening Dan its erm 127bpm I think
I love slow grooves mate.
dan the acid man
20-09-2005, 03:48 AM
love the hats, they sound mad, kind of sounds like someone dropping a load of spoons on a tray but with a rhythm to it :lol: :cool:
over all the production sounds ok to me, maybe ad a bit more mid with some extra percussion.
nice structure though, different, the way it fades in and out in places
stjohn
20-09-2005, 04:40 AM
this is cool man.. deepndark as fuk. ive only listened to it on crappy earfones, but everything seems kosher!
nice
The Teknoist.
20-09-2005, 07:10 PM
really digging this man.. excellent
BRADLEE
20-09-2005, 07:14 PM
Yeah Steve I'm liking this one for sure. I downloaded it yesterday homie, but am really re-listening right now. Nice one for sure, but I do agree that it could come in with more impact some how after the break...but all in all well wikked track. Maybe add or change a pattern after that break to give it just a little more movement.
B
Dope one dude!!!!
love the kick and lows on this one... really heavy!!! highs are sounding cool to me as well!!!!
get me those samples !!!
:rambo:
Mindful
21-09-2005, 08:28 PM
Dope one dude!!!!
love the kick and lows on this one... really heavy!!! highs are sounding cool to me as well!!!!
get me those samples !!!
:rambo:
Ive got em here now if your online mate
Mindful
21-09-2005, 08:34 PM
Thanks for listening people and thanks for feedback :love:
Regarding the impact after the break maybe I'll have a play and see if I can do somthing.
Originaly it had more impact and more of a build up into the kick in but it didnt seem to suit the effect that I was after so I made it a little more about the vibe(thats what I tried any how)
Ill have a bash again maybe.
Cheers ;)
sounds sweet. like the submarine vibe. nice combination of smooth & crunchy noises. heavy stuff....
Mindful
23-09-2005, 05:59 PM
Cheers for listening j_s
I like submarines alltho I prefere German U-boats if im honest :lol:
thanks for feedback mate :love:
Elvio Neto
24-09-2005, 11:27 AM
nice and dark
i love this track man
very good quality, non typical hard experimental stuff :clap: i like everything in this tune ! dark athmosphere, great vocal, shit this really should be on 12"
ohh now i have something in mind, there arent any ride cymbals in track, i think if you could used them the track would be better (imo) :)
great stuff !
Mindful
26-09-2005, 05:09 PM
Thanks for listening people.
will look it to the ride cymbal thang there is a place near the start of the track where it possibly needs an extra element(after the first deley type edit)
I tend not to use them most of the time tho(neither does Lau I think)
Also I must point out that this is a Lau and Casual violence track its not just me so Ive slapped my own wrist :doh: :lol:
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