Arkon -Equalibrium - Hard techno

[arkon]

i dont really make this sort of stuff much so im not 100% sure what im doing . feedback would be appreciated . its only a 1st run through , a couple of hours on it and really needs a re-write and proper mixdown

http://members.iinet.net.au/~djarkon...brium-demo.mp3

[force]

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[arkon]

http://members.iinet.net.au/~djarkon/arkon-equalibrium-demo.mp3

[rhythmtech]

this is a nice tune.. sorta.. its more like 2 nice tunes.

the main beats are a little too atmospheric for the hard synth.. but the synth is lovely..

mixdown is a little harsh and all over the place. lacks bass.

not a bad effort at all though.

[arkon]

thanks man

i have beefed the percussion up abit now