my fisrt pumpbeat techno song... opinions please!!!

[knizzle]

Hi guys!

my first post at this forum, ive seen some nice productions here...

This is one of my first 'finished' songs...

made it in fruity loops..

tell me what you think,

greetz from Holland

http://www.klaverstijn.nl/knizzle-track01.mp3

[The Overfiend]

I like the textures.
A bit Rush, but the funk feel is definitely there. I likes.
Send it to projex.

[ampassasinbirmingham]

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[knizzle]

url not work?????????

it should...

just opened it...

[catscan-nl]

Very nice techno to listen :) only I don't like the melody... But 'het gaat wel lekker door!!!' I think u can dance very chill at this track :D

[technopunk]

you made this on fruity? nice! real nice, i'd totally rock this. keep up the good work !!

very impressed!

c

[knizzle]

Thankz guys for your remarks and compliments!!!