newest hard techno tune

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

heres my newest techno tune, its still to be mixed down and mastered because my computer runs vista and alot of my programmes dnt seem to be workin prop. but just wanted to see what ppl thought about it.

http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/1/3/591310/seperation%20station.mp3

[xfive]

Well I think the arrangement stays pretty interesting for the whole of the tune, so that part is fine.
In terms of mixdown, the midrange definitely needs some proper eq and seperation done, and the bass could go much deeper (as an adjustment to the synth, not eq) and the top end could be a little more pronounced/sparkly. The mid range kind of hides it right now.

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

nice 1 appreciate it, will take into account when i mix and master it cheers

[judas_beast]

Graham. ive said it before, and ill ****ing well say it again; your tunes have REALLY intersting progession and edits, but the production is always a littl muddy for my tastes. Clean it up, get more low end 'rummmpppphhhhhfff' and more hi end 'tichchchchckcjkcjcjci' and you'll be game on mate.

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

alrite sweetheart, im workin on it

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

newest version of seperation station

http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/1/3/591310/seperation%20station%20final.mp3

and my newest tune called yoghurt cock

http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/1/3/591310/yoghurt%20cock%20final.mp3

will change the vocal sample round soon tho.

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

n e 1?

[MARK ANXIOUS]

for me seperation lacks swing and groove. it's a bit like plod plod plod and that off beat sound is not helping. you need a good sub bassline in there from the beginning i think. hmmm not really feeling it, sorry. :ohdear:

yogurt cock has more potential. needs much more movement. that stab sound when the vocal comes in sounds a bit wet trumpety, needs beefing up and giving much more attitude. the riff in the break is interesting, almost old school belgian but with far less attitude but just doesnt grab you take you on a ride.

keep going mate. making music is gradual process of learning and you're getting there. just make thing a little more agressive and meaningful. :;

[GRAHAM ACIDIC]

cheers mr g, will take into account. only been producing for about a year and a half now so still learning alot.