rest in peace

[guil-out]

Hello to everyone this is my first post on this excelent forum.
I know there is a lot of great producers here !
I try to make my own productin since 2 years and i need your opinion :)
It's a techno track call rest in peace without any pretention feedback welcome !

the link http://www.myspace.com/djguilout

Ps : sorry for my english...

[guil-out]

anyone ?

[Little_Fella!]

I'll be avin a listen to your MySpaff but it is better to post your tracks to a file host like speedyshare.com ... which is less annoying regarding being bombarded with adverts than some of the others

You can up your bit rate to 320kbps and the like.. this makes it easier for people to comment on your production techniques and not just the aesthetics of your music...:xwink:

[xfive]

Good start, I think your main issues here are separation between the sounds. Everything sounds like its sitting in one cramped box. Very centered, and the stuff that is panned is panned in an uneven way. The midrange sound that's panned hard right should be adjusted.
There's also lack of bass in here in terms of frequencies deeper than the kick. Try taking your main synth that comes in and layering another one with it a few octaves lower.