New Track by me (untitled for the moment)

[djfilthmonger]

After messing around with different music programs I finally have made a track.
I used reason,ableton,m-audio controller,Alex Calver loop pack,robert natus schranz vs hard techno loop pack.
Any feedback is definetly appreciated , being new to producing I need as much tips as possible.
http://www.sendspace.com/file/4zd8v7

Regards,
djfilthmonger

[djfilthmonger]

whoops posted this in the wrong section,Can some one move it for me please?

cheers