Funky (?) Techno tracks made by Ritzi Lee

[Ritzi Lee]

- Mission : To create order from chaos.
- Origin : District 68 Amsterdam.
- Sound : dark, hard, minimal, uptempo.

* Down The Floor (http://damien.selwerd.nl/underground_liberation/tracks/down_the_floor.mp3)
* 2 Times (http://damien.selwerd.nl/underground_liberation/tracks/2_times.mp3)

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enjoy :twisted:

[professor]

If you are looking for any comments then here goes...

Down the Tempo - I think that the highs are too loud in the mix. They sting. I think they are too bright also... This is not minimal techno. The drum rolls and the sound that comes in at about 1min. sounds like hard house...

2 times - much better mixing then the first. Good start. Unfortunately, I don't much like the sound you use as the mix progresses, especially the vocal sample. The analog bass sound (comes in just after 1min. then again at about 3.5min.) is too forward in the mix and sounds thin. just a matter of preference.

Other than that both tracks are well arranged, and no doubt took some time to put together. Thanks for let'n me listen.

[Ritzi Lee]

thanks 4 the comments professor:

Down the Floor: needs to be mixed properly. this is just a ruff sketch.
About the drum rolls. No it ain't hardhouse!! Its just hard. :lol:
And i don't have a hardhouse feeling with this. That's because there is to much funk inside.

In 2 times: the analog bass sound - i EQ'd the subs away. To add with the rest of the sounds you get a more hardcore kinda feeling. And thanks for remarking the "forward" thing. I will ajust this. :)

[Ritzi Lee]

i think i will remove the voicesamples and the extra melodie in "2 times"

[dan the acid man]

i quite liked down the floor, i agree the hats are too sharp and forward in the mix but apart from that it was fine, also i dont think the synth was too hardhouse but i like london techno and some people on here probably think some things in that are cheesy but i dont care.

the 2nd tune was better mixed but i agree about the synth in this one it needs something, but thats probably personal taste, i would have used a bit of delay or something, but all in all some decent work.

[The Overfiend]

The first sounds like an old todd terry loop but i like nevertheless I can do without the analog bass though. the second was good overall good stuff, i like the club sound obviously but lose the analog bass.

[Ritzi Lee]

ajusted "2 times".
threw out the melody synth.
made some changes in the arrangement.

here (http://damien.selwerd.nl/underground_liberation/tracks/2_times_(ajusted).mp3).

[dan the acid man]

ajusted "2 times".
threw out the melody synth.
made some changes in the arrangement.

here (http://damien.selwerd.nl/underground_liberation/tracks/2_times_(ajusted).mp3).

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[Ritzi Lee]

ajusted "2 times".
threw out the melody synth.
made some changes in the arrangement.

here (http://damien.selwerd.nl/underground_liberation/tracks/2_times_(ajusted).mp3).

the link isnt working

it's working now.
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