I need your ears on this 'un.

[DannyBlack]

I've been masturbating my new VST's over the past 48 hours and have found something that seems to be working. I'm pleased with the kick, can't get the rides to behave and there is a shit load more work to do. Before I slog on I need critique from whoever has a few minutes to spare please.

Cheers in advance.

http://rapidshare.com/files/189260951/bloodyhell.mp3

[djfilthmonger]

nice track. groovy.

[DannyBlack]

cheers man. thats only the basic idea of where i want to go with it. im EQing parts of it at the moent to make them stand out cos that bass is pretty dominant at the low end. trying to pick the mids and hi's up.

[Siege]

kick sounds pretty solid and punchy, the offbeat bass needs fattening up, get some sub in there or something. Sounds like youve used the db glitch or something on the melody?

[DannyBlack]

yeah man, finally got the db glitch working. it is sexy. I have messed with that bass some more because it did sound a little weakish. sub is a good call mate. I also ran the beat box style perc loop through a compressor to make it shine through a bit more. still gotta sort out hat, snare and tom loops to give it some groove, cos its sounding a little flat.

cheers for the listen and feedback mate.

[stjohn]

"
Error

The uploader has removed this file from the server."

[Radic]

yeah same. error still coming up

[DannyBlack]

Shit, I must have taken it down. I'm still working on it so I'll blam it up later. the only good part of it is the glitchy piano thing to be honest.