what would you do to this.

[The Divide]

Just popping around my mates house for a smoke, thought I would post this to see if any board members have any ideas, feedback on this track...

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.mp3

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow. Thanks :)

[dan the acid man]

after the break at 1.40 i would probably add some kind of percussion, probably some harsh, quite sharp kind of percussion, apart from that i wouldnt do much else, its very good

[The Divide]

Thanks man

[audioinjection]

I like how it sounds just the way it is, keeps it minimal ;)

[The Divide]

Ohhh hahaha, well I have reworked it but its still no where near done. Feeling this skunk at mo :lol:

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.02.mp3

[dan the acid man]

sounding even better :dance:

[The Overfiend]

I think the aura needs a more dreamier landscape
I would like to see more utlization of the vocal.
Other wise you know I'm feeling it.
Fernandizzle.

[The Divide]

Thanks man, ive changed a few elements and worked on this more. I think the bass and kick could sound better, it still needs more work.

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.03.mp3

Cheers :hmm:

[dan the acid man]

very nice, i agree with you though about the bass and kick, they dont seem to be sitting together right

[Buttman]

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow.

You are so German! :lol:

[The Divide]

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow.

You are so German! :lol:

ACHUNG ACHUNG

Hahahahahahah :lol: :lol: :lol: :doh:

[The Overfiend]

http://mi.mgcdn.us/Ge/Geolani_Gambino/shoot.JPG

I would make it more gangster!
:lol: :lol: :lol:

[romelpotter]

I dig this track, but what i would do is with the peak at 4:40 would be to sustain the rush for a bit instead of lowering and reducing it down, but that said i think this is a great track :lol:

[The Divide]

Had a go, thanks man.

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.04.mp3

[romelpotter]

I can't listen to it untill the weekend :doh: but I am looking forward to listing to it man ;) :lol:

[thomasdanger]

really great music!!