Tune 4 u

[Tyrisia]

Just made this tune, and wondered if some of u could give me some feedback to help me finish it off - any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated - Cheers! :D

Right Click to Save As (http://www.tyrisia.iofm.net/Last%20of%20the%20First-46.MP3)

[MARKEG]

1st feelings:

the kick drum need to be less mid .. take away a bit of the mid and you've got yourself a seriously good track....


also (a mnuch smaller critisism) the open hi hat could be more prominamt (use reverb perhaps for this????)

definitely the kick is the problem....

this is really great stuff ... i'm proud to have you on the board...

please keep posting your stuff....

[MARKEG]

tip: use a spectrum anylyser and get the kick sounding good... make it sit with bass beautifully.........!!!!

[Tyrisia]

Thanx 4 the compliment - all my flatmates r into heavy rock so it's hard 2 get knowledgable opinions!

I'm already on it with the kik, ur dead rite - 2 much mid, I'll post a revised copy sometime 2morrow. Where do I get a spectrum analyser (in software)?

I've also turned up the open hat, works a treat - thanx 4 the advice! :D

[Tyrisia]

Here's the revised version of aforementioned tune if anyone's interested -

Right Click Save As (http://www.tyrisia.iofm.net/Last%20of%20the%20First-46.MP3)

[MARKEG]

your link doesn't work!

[Tyrisia]

I've edited the link - it should work now!

[MARKEG]

nope , still doesn't work!!!

[Anonymous]

We love it. Would quite like to have a little remix of it if you fancy ... ?

Baz

[Tyrisia]

Tell me more Baz....