New Original Song - Feedback appreciated

[danodes]

Here's a tune a made a month ago:

12 - Don't Lose by DanoDEStruction on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free (http://soundcloud.com/danodestruction/12-dont-lose)

Feel free to give feedback. :wave:

[Loop]

yeah this has some great ideas but its another one thats running on one leg. Theres something keeping the beats from pullling it forward.