Hard techno track by New

[new]

Hey, Im new to this board, I thought I would post a track that I made as an introduction. Im just starting to get into production, and have been djing for about 5 years now. Im from Halifax NS Canada. Hi!

http://www.electric-atlantic.com/profile.asp?show=music&ID=9

I wrote this track about someone, shes german in origan so I took that as a starting point and went from there. check it out, give me some feedback.

[dan the acid man]

you have got talent and some good ideas but i found this a little too repetetive for my tastes, the mix also sounded alittle too linear, it could maybe do with a lttle space adding, but i liked some of the synth work going on

[new]

cool thanks, question: what do you mean by linier?