Komplex - Silent Movement

[Komplex]

K guys, this is probably the first track I've sat down and written from start to finnish in months so I'm a little rusty.

Its stll in progress but so far I've realised the hats need a bit more variety, and maybe the atmospherics need to be quieter. Apart from that I'm sort of stuck with what to do next.

Any help would be wikid.


http://xelpmok.customer.netspace.net...20movement.mp3

[xfive]

I like it - nice ideas and sounds in there. I don't think the atmospherics need to be turned down but I think maybe the main perc bit needs to come down a _hair_ so it leaves some room for the rest. The reverb is cool too.. maybe a little much but it depends on what type of feel you're going for ;)

[professor]

nice stuff. too much verb.

[Komplex]

Yes, I agree on the reverb. Bit too much on the drums so it melds with the atmospherics too much. Easy fix :)

xfive - do you mean that main percussive snare type sound that comes in at around 40 seconds?

cheers guys.

anybody else listened to it on different speakers?

[sash]

For the type of track it is, i think the reverb works well cuz u get lost in the sound. Awesome sounds dude. Well balanced mix imo. For the type of track it is everything works nicely.

I'd keep the verb cuz then u could bring in some mean ass dry track (dry as in not much verb) and the shift in atmospheric sound would b like ear candy.

[dan the acid man]

the kick is a little too muddy and distant for my liking.
i love the flanged noise, it sort of sounds like a plane landing in the distance.
the main elements are there for a good track, it just need's re-arranging a little more, i agree with the hat's, add a little variety.

[dirty_bass]

Crazy track.
I like this, very different, yet still accessable.
The kick could be just slightly clearer and brighter.
All the mid range is quite upfront, but it works, it`s the most important area and most neglected, but you`ve filled it nicely.
The top end is a little soft, and could be just a little sharper, especially as if cut to vinyl, it would lose some edge, due to the restrictions of vinyl.
Maybe just a little more bottom end roundness as will.
I think this is a wicked tune. Very moody and atmospheric, but with nice busy mid range percussion.
I think basically it just needs to be made a little broader in the eq. ie a bit further into the high and low frequencies.
The verb is nice, I cranked this on the studio rig and the mids cut through it nicely.

Bloody well done mate, vinyl worthy I reckon :clap:

[xfive]

xfive - do you mean that main percussive snare type sound that comes in at around 40 seconds?

Yeah that's the one I meant... but either way it sounds good ;)

[Komplex]

thanks for the feedback guys :)

Bloody well done mate, vinyl worthy I reckon

thanx chief, wanna release it on your label? ;)

[romelpotter]

wow this track is cool, good work fella :lol: :lol:

[DJZeMigL]

The verb is nice but I think I would lower it a little bit and ease up on the verb send 4 some of the percution.. i could use a lounder/ puncier kick/ bass...

I also think the first sound around 40s comes in a bit sudden...

I u luv 2 hear some of these a little dryer!!

Mad sounds/ atmospherics :clap:

Z