a few tracks

[jesus]

i got some tracks online for you to listen to and pass comment. dont expect anything good as im quite new to this, i just wanna know how things are coming along and what bits stand out as being shit so i can change em etc.. oh yeah im shit at arrangement so any pointers are welcomed.


1. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5928 - not too sure on this one , bass sounds nice in my speakers though.

2. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5902 - dont know what i was up too here, but again the bass is nice down this end.

3. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=6022 - some shitty bass in this ,quite like the percussion though

4. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5763 - i think i went a bit over the top with t-racks on this not sure though.

5. http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=5663 - cheese.

[The Overfiend]

Links didn't work for me hey soose!

[Col]

down for me too.

[dan the acid man]

1/ nice production on this one, the only thing i would maybe change is to turn down the shaker a little

2/ The kick is too middy on this one, it need's more bottom end, the hat patterns are great, they just need brightening up a little and some of the lower freq's taken out, i really like the tambourine/shaker.

3/ this track is your best imo, the kick sit's really nice, i love the bassline, maybe it just need's a bit more bottom end though, one thing i wasnt too keen on is the extreme panning of the hats.

4/ the production of this is a little too muddy and flat, but the track iteslf is pretty good

5/ this is much punchier, im not too sure of the kick though, too much decay for my liking.
i love the reverb soaked hit's in the background,but the hat's again are a little too dull.

[jesus]

feck. what bout this one http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5763 if it doesnt work ill change the site.

[dan the acid man]

they all worked for me, you just have to scroll down and select play

[jesus]

cheers for the comments dan, i'll set to work with some changes and stuff.

[The Overfiend]

feck. what bout this one http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5763 if it doesnt work ill change the site.

Liking it, the sweep sound its a lil dirty either verb and chorus it or leave it grimey. I think the track needed more hats. But I'm loving the jack(I FECKIN' LOVE JACK!!!) in it. I would totally spin this with some mastering. Good Job Hey Soose!

[jesus]

cheers scummer ,good to know you like it i'll get into some hihating and heavy eq work .gonna change the sweeps a bit too and give them some variation. heres the rest straight download

1. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5928

2. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5902

3. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=6022

5. http://www.dance-industries.com/dltr...?track_id=5663