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[detfella]

techno44

to finish>>>

[Patrick DSP]

it's late here so i had to listen to it at low volume, so please take this all with a grain of salt...
you said this was a rough version ie not finished. so i'll go easy. i think your ride that you have going all the way though seems a little loud. i'd lower it a bit, pitch it up 2semi tones, pan it a little to the right or left and add a slight reverb to give it that shine that i think is oh so nice on rides.

that's all i can really comment on cause all i can really hear are those rides at this volume. but i can see the potential in this and i like some of the ideas and the patterns in this. finish it off oh and maybe bring up your lower mid range in volume.

but what do i know really.

[Kevin Gorman]

I agree with DSP, I also think that the ride goes on for to long in the track, use the ride as a lift in certain areas of your track rather then having it go throughout most of the track. Other then that it's sounding good!! Keep up the hard work.

[detfella]

thanks for comments, really helpful!

[detfella]

think it's almost cooked.

44v0.2

[dirty_bass]

10 seconds in and I`m loving it.
Nice use of polyrythmic elements.
Generally nice.
Like a very smooth steve stoll tune.
This is the best thing I`ve heard from you dude.
I love it, I`d play it if it was on vinyl.
Only thing I can pick out, is that the mid range lacks any sounds with substance, like something that goes "chonk" or something. Something with a bit more punch, to make it more fun to mix.
Wicked track.

[fatcollective]

yessssssss! I love this tune...very full, very busy, very interesting..nice arrangements, good use of samples, plenty of synthy noises/stabs...yeah ...10/10 :clap: :clap:

[dan the acid man]

yes, this is a pretty nice tune, it does need a little more to the mids as dirty bass said, everything else though sounds spot on

[detfella]

ok, gonna sort out the mids. cheers guys. :)

[Col]

love the high range elements, very intricate, and the bass?... it just rocks.

i think the ride is beneficial to the track, but i would suggest using it over 8/16 bars at a couple of different sections of the track. id buy this, no questions asked.

i agree with DB. this is your best yet.