New track from me

[Milesy]

remember im just a beginner and i havent quite homed down my skills
yet with mastering and eq'ing etc... quite muddy but i can go back and
change the eq's after some feedback from y'all :)

http://www.chrismiles.pwp.blueyonder...freshed-02.mp3

Im hoping to have a rough edit thats playable down for NYE

hope to hear from some of you :)

[Milesy]

any feedback :cry:

[CORROSIVE]

different, not my cup o tea, but its not awfull.

[loopdon]

i like the stabby part in the middle, you could ty a variation on that, say
play the stab double evrey second or 4th patter or so, just to add a little interest. don't like the reesebass coming up later on (reesemx?), try building it up around the middle (say about 2.40) and don't have the stabs playing all the time, take them out at times, so they will remain fuunnnkkkey ;)


btw, did you use a ride, if not: do so

[Evil G]

interesting. some of the changes caught me off guard a bit, but i like that in a tune.

can't say i liked the bassline at all. i did like arpegiated electro synth part near the end, but i thought it needed to be thicker.

many cool and interesting ideas though. nice to hear something different.

[Milesy]

cool cheers for the replies... yeah loopdon.. thats the best i could get out
of that damn reesemx lol im gona try get a more fatter sound out my
virus... the basline was just a quick 2 second thing lol.. il try get
something better as well....

the only thing i dont like is the drums seems to be marching
i need it to bounce a little more.. possibly need some samples off
beat to facilitate this

[MangaFish]

considering how minimal it was, i didnt think the sounds were rhythmically interesting enough to keep the tune rolling

[n.o.r.o]

this track have good house chord. and track is little boring for me