Somthing slow and moody......unfinished

**Mindful** · 18-05-2005, 11:08 PM

I dont realy like the idea of posting my music cause I dont think its good enuff yet.....but I want to finish this track so could do with some input and fresh ears.
any feedback good or bad would be cool.Thanks

http://www.iluvtekno.com/Casual_viol...otate_cube.mp3

**BRADLEE** · 18-05-2005, 11:28 PM

nice minimal dark little groover right here. Can't wait to hear the finished product!!!

**audioinjection** · 18-05-2005, 11:55 PM

oops, didnt see this thread, i replied in your other one

but here is what i said

hey, this track sounds dope

i like that dark atmosphere and groove to it, good stuff man

**xfive** · 19-05-2005, 12:19 AM

Pretty nice start.. I like sounds used.
Could go for some more low end... its pretty flabby/hollow right now.
Kick is fine tho.

Keep us posted ;)

**Mindful** · 19-05-2005, 12:22 AM

Originally Posted by xfive

Could go for some more low end... its pretty flabby/hollow right now.
;)

Cheers geezer will look into that.

**dirty_bass** · 20-05-2005, 09:52 PM

wow, I like this.
I`m liking the fact that we are starting to get more variety of techno in this forum, it`s about time.

Lovely subtle ambience in the back of this, understated, but full of menace.
Nice little percussion build.
Top end could be brighter, I know you are kind of keeping a very tense and restrained sound in this track, but you could still get a little more brightness into the top end.

I would say as you continue with this track, try to go beyond the surgeon esque, nothing but ambience and a beat, and try to add something musical to it, but it`s early days and so far I`m really really into this.

**Mindful** · 20-05-2005, 10:40 PM

Originally Posted by dirty_bass

Top end could be brighter, I know you are kind of keeping a very tense and restrained sound in this track, but you could still get a little more brightness into the top end.

cheers will do

Originally Posted by dirty_bass

I would say as you continue with this track, try to go beyond the surgeon esque, nothing but ambience and a beat, and try to add something musical to it

Noted.

thanks for comments.

**Sunil** · 21-05-2005, 12:30 AM

Sounds good, very hypnotic. I like the minimal feel of it, everything is running into each other nicely :clap:

**j_s** · 21-05-2005, 07:26 PM

cool stuff. dark & murky vibes...
it's maybe a little lacking in punch, but i guess that's not what you are aiming for with this...
some more traditional musical devices would probably work well & make the track a bit more memorable....

**stjohn** · 21-05-2005, 07:46 PM

very nice atmosphere mate!!!

**Mindful** · 21-05-2005, 08:27 PM

thanks for the feedback people :clap: very helpful indeed.
I will be working on this tonight.
gonna try and sort out the top and bottom ends,extend the intro,add a few more percussion elements and hopfully move on and add some chords.

**lau** · 21-05-2005, 09:54 PM

Yeah..!!

Liking this... Just try to work it out a bit more... like the intro though heavy nd dark !!!

nice dark stuff...!! Looking forward to your work of tonight..!!

**Mindful** · 22-05-2005, 09:29 PM

Been working on this last night and most of today.its doing my head in a bit

Think ive give the top end a bit of a polish but struggleing with that bottom end.
Also added a few little bits.
Will try and post results this week.Need a break from it for now my head hurts :lol:

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