Some heads down stuff for the floor..probably could do with a few subtle edits. comments and feedback much appreciated
http://213.129.73.14/members/my_trac...9CF8102229.mp3
Some heads down stuff for the floor..probably could do with a few subtle edits. comments and feedback much appreciated
http://213.129.73.14/members/my_trac...9CF8102229.mp3
cool man, sounding fat here on my headfones... nice slow tempo with a lovely groove. the edits are grand, enough to keep me interested.
not mad on the synth at 2.00... kinda doesnt sound as fat as the rest. maybe some reverb could drop it backa bit.
it may be a tad too long... i reckon if you squeezed it into a shorter space, and with an extra hi/perx loop towards then end to fill in....youd be flying...
tis nice work tho, the production is v lush :;
i really like m8. nice atmosphere. i liking ur breakdown 4.45. but u could make some more progression after when it comes back 5.56. i reckon. perhaps leave that bass line.
this my opinion
Enjoyed it too, but like stjohn didn't fancy the synth at 2:00 either, it's seems little off from the rest of the tune.
Nice mix, and nice groove.
Production sounds realy nice at home on the moniters Cal, the bottom end is super.
as said some development later on (after the break)will work well also i agree in shortening it(say down to around 5 mins)
good shit homo:)
Thanks for the feedback guys,much appreciated...yeah,track length definatley needs shortening,dont usually write stuff longer than 7min...Im 50/50 myself about the synth,il have a mess,see if i can make it sit better or lose it...probably will get rid and add something else in its place. Also agree about some more progression after the break...everything else im pretty much happy with..to add to
thanks again for feedback
kinda possitive funky sound, ok ;] have to say it bounces really clear, interesting....
Is a track very special i think...You use sounds that usually we can hear in minimal tracks and some of that maybe in house music.
Sounds very good and convincing, very original, it seems really new stuff, not stuff as mr. X stuff i mean...
I like even someone brings the light to this dark dungeon....xD
yeeeah... i forget it
The sound is great, really clear.