Hey up...
This has quite an affront to it... I like the approach with your percussion - quite demanding to start off // nice tech house stab there (in ma right ear ;) too far ovva tho for me .. ;) heh
You have moved on also.. you monitoring differently now? Structure is good with nice changes ... again am in headphones as cant monitor proppper yet but the production is well improved...
By gum... like the little acid flick in the background - bass is chunky and your kick is well defined, although could do with a bit more sub on it ...
Tops are just on the edge of being harsh on the top end but you have it controlled I reckon... have a look at it tho as when the hat slashes around it might be too much on a rig... 16K is the deadly frequency
awwwww.. this stops on the Quicktime player at 3/4qtr's way thro the track for some reason
Not sure why your stuff is playing in auto Quicktime, as with Curly, it might be my end I reckon... these players tend to insinuate themselves where they are not wanted and you can't identify timings with comments, which is rubbish
One last thing.. (s it's twat o'clock int morning after a session on the pezzle I better go to bed ;) have a look at your synth riff and fill it out a bit .. chorus/delay/reverb stc. BUT only like 10% or so on the wet/dry and see how it sits in the mix.. the more musicallity the better
Good track...