what would you do to this.

**The Divide** · 11-02-2004, 07:21 PM

Just popping around my mates house for a smoke, thought I would post this to see if any board members have any ideas, feedback on this track...

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.mp3

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow. Thanks :)

**dan the acid man** · 11-02-2004, 08:02 PM

after the break at 1.40 i would probably add some kind of percussion, probably some harsh, quite sharp kind of percussion, apart from that i wouldnt do much else, its very good

**The Divide** · 11-02-2004, 08:57 PM

Thanks man

**audioinjection** · 11-02-2004, 11:01 PM

I like how it sounds just the way it is, keeps it minimal ;)

**The Divide** · 11-02-2004, 11:58 PM

Ohhh hahaha, well I have reworked it but its still no where near done. Feeling this skunk at mo :lol:

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.02.mp3

**dan the acid man** · 12-02-2004, 12:09 AM

sounding even better

**The Overfiend** · 12-02-2004, 12:13 AM

I think the aura needs a more dreamier landscape
I would like to see more utlization of the vocal.
Other wise you know I'm feeling it.
Fernandizzle.

**The Divide** · 14-02-2004, 03:14 PM

Thanks man, ive changed a few elements and worked on this more. I think the bass and kick could sound better, it still needs more work.

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.03.mp3

Cheers :hmm:

**dan the acid man** · 14-02-2004, 04:08 PM

very nice, i agree with you though about the bass and kick, they dont seem to be sitting together right

**Buttman** · 14-02-2004, 04:39 PM

Originally Posted by Fernando

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow.

You are so German! :lol:

**The Divide** · 14-02-2004, 07:02 PM

Originally Posted by Buttman

Originally Posted by Fernando

I think It could be a bit too atmospheric, prolly gonna add more drums and elements tomorrow.

You are so German! :lol:

ACHUNG ACHUNG

Hahahahahahah :lol: :lol: :lol:

**The Overfiend** · 14-02-2004, 08:11 PM

I would make it more gangster!
:lol: :lol: :lol:

**romelpotter** · 15-02-2004, 03:00 PM

I dig this track, but what i would do is with the peak at 4:40 would be to sustain the rush for a bit instead of lowering and reducing it down, but that said i think this is a great track :lol:

**The Divide** · 15-02-2004, 05:15 PM

Had a go, thanks man.

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/20.04.mp3

**romelpotter** · 17-02-2004, 12:51 PM

I can't listen to it untill the weekend

but I am looking forward to listing to it man ;) :lol:

**thomasdanger** · 02-03-2004, 07:03 PM

really great music!!

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