Blood_Star - Isolation /such a dark techno track/

[BloodStar]

Hi guys,
please listen to my new dark techno track. Any comments are much appreciated.
thanx a lot

[BloodStar]

ohh f*ck, here is the link:

http://audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=2083

[dan the acid man]

some nice ideas, the tune just lack's a lttle energy for me, it's something i struggle with aswell, it also sounds a lttle muddy, some of the sounds need seperating a bit more

[BloodStar]

thanks for comment, I'll have to spend more time on it and will aim on sub, hhats and drums a bit more. hope it helps the track to be more powerfull. Will post it here soon....

[Col]

i downloaded but, the file wouldnt open in media player?

[BloodStar]

:lol: go ahead, once again......

[thorin]

this is pretty banging! some good ideas here.

like dan said it sounds a bit muddy. A lot of the time in techno the Kick needs to push thru the mix and be really clear especially with this style.

Its a common mistake to make to push the bass up so it rumbles like in a lot of the new experimental stuff.

but most of the time it makes it too messy and you wont beable to master it properly...

I like this choon still, be good to hear how this progresses :)

luke

[BloodStar]

Hello,once again.
I reworked the track, add some rhtythm lines and drums.

comments are appreciated:

http://audionet.sk/Mp3/down.php?ids=2083

[conflict]

This is a wicked track,i'd definately play it,its my kind of techno,nice and rolling.Good stuff

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[Mika Silo]

cool track! I like the sounds you used. It still sounds quite muddy imo, you should work on that.. other than that, very nice track! :)

[dirty_bass]

yeah, this is pretty good.

Still muddy as has been said. It needs brightening up. And more activity in the top end, more hats maybe.

Personally I would change the bassline from the standard techno offbeat reverb swoop to something more rumbly and analogue, but really thats just my own taste.

I like the distorted guitar type synth, it adds dramatic punctuation.

[BloodStar]

Hey,
thank you all for the helpful comments.
I'll still have to add something more into it and also try to prevent the muddy sound of the lows. maybe eworking the bassline will be good idea. I'll try.

thanx

[DJVirulent]

A tip from past experience...jack the highs up more than this post-master, because they'll get dragged back down again when it goes to vinyl. Right now if this got pressed where would be absolutely no high-end presence.

Other than that, cool track, nice sounds definitely, very much in the Compound vein of things.